Epitaph
EpitaphThe poems form a universewithin the writer's mind;totality in metered verse;infinity defined.The poet gives my soul awayin portions he decideswith thoughts that ebb and flow to playemotions...
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Gosh Wayne,How true those words are.Wonderful ports of call along the way, nonetheless.Merlin
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Dear Wayne,I suppose ballad stanza is as sing-songy as any meter although the three-beats sing too.Here you've added to the flow with just three periods over twenty lines and added rhymes in lines...
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Fine job, Wayne! Irrefragable truths memorably expressed. Impeccable verse form and rhymes. Who could ask for anything more?jtb
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Wayne...Great meter, rhyme and a thoughtful message...the perfect combo for the little jewel this is. I enjoyed it muchly.Sue
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If an epitaph for youth, then there should also be a birth announcement for middle age *grin*. I've decided not to let my youth die, but to drag it along with me kicking and screaming.H.And it harm...
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Wayne, your rhythms and rhymes are always a pleasure to read. As to an epitaph for youth -- I've tried to murder mine several times, but it keeps evading the poisons I lay for it and pounces out at...
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This is an excellent piece, Wayne. I really enjoyed the read, and the smile it gave me. Jan or you can view my personal poetry webpage at Poems For The Heart and Soul
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Thanks to all who commented:Hi Merlin...And JGD... only three periods?... that was an accident... I just throw in punctuation randomly, having no idea how to use the stuff...Thanks John...and...
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Wayne,This is a fine example of what poetry ought to be. A deep contemplation presented in simple rhythmic form, rather than assuming a superior tone.the happy chappy
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Wow, Heinz... I just got back from a (4 day) trip to Switzerland to find this old (2003) poem at the top of the heap. I guess that means you like it? I do...one of my favorites (is it okay to like...
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Bravo!! Sorry I missed this one the first time. Metrical precision,.... You get the Serpents' poetry award.
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Hey Wayne. This is a very nice job. Nicely written with a good message as well. Not as easy to do as it looks. Enjoyed.Yours, DarkClick on pic to see my newest books, "How Bright Her Beauty Shines"...
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Hi Wayne,let me add to thle other comments. I enjooyed this, as I enjoy all your poems. Good flow, good meaning.(I guess you have heard about the fate of the Oriskany. I recall the short time (one...
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Thanks Serpent! An award?? Wow. Cool!Dark, glad you liked it...Shelby,Yes, I am following the news on the Oriskany.... actually, we feel pretty good about it now that it has been finally decided that...
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